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not bad
Good animation and whatnot but unfortunately i have to agree with Blud-Shot. The scripting just didn't seem very realistic, perhaps a little naive. Like in the desert scene when one of them was takin th piss of the other, it jus wasn't that funny and jus left me cringing a bit. but dude, no freakin way could i produce something like this - its jus that it was ruined by the scripting and in places, quite wooden acting...
Got it! I will work more on scripting and lines and what not. I don't think i'm a very funny guy by default, so trying to get the general public to at the very least giggle at the scene must have been very awkward to see me try. Once again, we are pretty much amateurs and are trying to grow constantly in all things medium! Hopefully in the next ones you can see improvements. I hope you continue to leave construct reviews for us and everyone, they help immensely! <3
nice
donnie darko music! good choice. oh, and good animation........
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21 Year old glitch artist. I wanna make T-shirts probably. I definitely wanna make my computer vomit out pixels.
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